特级教师教你写作文:3年级课堂作文

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2016-05
版次: 1
ISBN: 9787214162557
定价: 25.00
装帧: 平装
开本: 16开
纸张: 轻型纸
  •   本书针对3年级小学生的写作特点,选取教材中的写作主题,通过分步审题、精选素材、巧列提纲、范文引路来手把手指导学生学习写作技巧,并配以同类佳作范文,设置旁批点评,总结佳作亮点。
      王大绩,是全国著名语文特级教师,中国自主招生网名师专家,长期从事高三教学、教研工作,十多年来一直参加北京市高考阅卷,并在阅卷领导小组负责《阅卷纵横》的编纂。悉心研究教学与高考规律,洞察各地高考试题走向。

    ◎分步来审题................................6

    ◎精心细选材................................6

    ◎名师手把手................................8如何写自己............................... 8

    ◎作文列提纲................................8

    ◎范文来引路................................9“三星级”的我....................... 9

    ◎佳作大展台.............................. 11爱打扮的我............................. 11我的名片................................. 13有这么一个人......................... 15馋嘴的我................................. 16独一无二的我......................... 18镜子中的我............................. 19

    ◎分步来审题.............................. 21

    ◎精心细选材.............................. 21

    ◎名师手把手.............................. 22如何写爸爸妈妈..................... 22如何写爷爷奶奶..................... 22

    ◎作文列提纲.............................. 23

    ◎范文来引路.............................. 23家有“不”妈......................... 23

    ◎佳作大展台.............................. 25唠叨的老妈............................. 25我的妈妈有点“傻”............. 26我的懒老爸............................. 28我的爸爸................................. 30“巫婆奶奶”......................... 31“酷”爷爷............................. 32

    ◎分步来审题.............................. 34

    ◎精心细选材.............................. 34

    ◎名师手把手.............................. 35如何写老师............................. 35如何写同学............................. 36

    ◎作文列提纲.............................. 36

    ◎范文来引路.............................. 37我们班的“神探”................. 37

    ◎佳作大展台.............................. 38我的“冤家”同桌................. 38我的书迷好友......................... 40“麻辣烫”正传..................... 41可爱的娃娃老师..................... 43我们的“村长”..................... 45

    我心中最美的人..................... 46

    ◎分步来审题.............................. 48

    ◎精心细选材.............................. 49

    ◎名师手把手.............................. 50如何写社会人物..................... 50

    ◎作文列提纲.............................. 50

    ◎范文来引路.............................. 50乐于助人的叔叔..................... 50

    ◎佳作大展台.............................. 52卖棉花糖的老爷爷................. 52乐于助人的老爷爷................. 53卖橘子的老奶奶..................... 55我家楼上的老奶奶................. 56

    ◎精心细选材.............................. 68

    ◎名师手把手.............................. 69

    ◎分步来审题.............................. 67 如何写课余生活..................... 69

    ◎作文列提纲.............................. 71

    ◎范文来引路.............................. 72吹泡泡..................................... 72

    ◎佳作大展台.............................. 73我的课余生活......................... 73我的课余生活......................... 75捉迷藏..................................... 77我的课余生活......................... 79我的课余生活......................... 80我与书法结缘......................... 82

    ◎分步来审题.............................. 84

    ◎精心细选材.............................. 84

    ◎名师手把手.............................. 85 如何写熟悉的人的一件事...... 85 

    ◎作文列提纲.............................. 88

    ◎范文来引路.............................. 88超级“自恋狂”..................... 88

    ◎佳作大展台.............................. 90贴心老爸................................. 90姐姐的秘密............................. 92同桌的往事............................. 93喝酒的爸爸............................. 95爱唠叨的妈妈......................... 97让人琢磨不透的外公............. 98

    ◎分步来审题.............................100

    ◎精心细选材.............................101

    ◎名师手把手.............................102如何写学会了某种本领.........102

    ◎作文列提纲.............................104

    ◎范文来引路.............................105我学会了洗衣服....................105

    ◎佳作大展台.............................106我学会了包饺子....................106我学会了滑滑板....................108我学会了番茄炒蛋................110我学会了游泳........................112我学会了清洗床头................113

    ◎分步来审题.............................116

    ◎精心细选材.............................116

    ◎名师手把手.............................117

    如何写爸爸、妈妈对自己的 爱........................................117 

    ◎作文列提纲.............................119

    ◎范文来引路.............................119“藏书”的故事....................119

    ◎佳作大展台.............................121母亲的唠叨............................121玩伴“老爸”........................123母爱伴我成长........................125爸爸的爱................................127爸爸的爱看不见....................129爸爸的爱................................130

    ◎分步来审题.............................132

    ◎精心细选材.............................132

    ◎名师手把手.............................133如何写一件有趣的事............133

    ◎作文列提纲.............................133

    ◎范文来引路.............................134

    帮小兔洗澡............................134

    ◎佳作大展台.............................135一件有趣的事........................135灭蝇行动................................137一件有趣的事........................139摸人游戏................................140搞笑一家人............................142

    ◎分步来审题.............................144

    ◎精心细选材.............................145

    ◎名师手把手.............................146 如何写生活中的传统文化.....146 

    ◎作文列提纲.............................148

    ◎范文来引路.............................148粽叶飘香话端午....................148

    ◎佳作大展台.............................150贴门神....................................150我喜欢舞龙灯........................152端午节....................................153看秧歌....................................154贴“福”字............................156

    ◎分步来审题.............................163

    ◎精心细选材.............................164

    ◎名师手把手.............................165如何写秋天的图画................165

    ◎作文列提纲.............................167

    ◎范文来引路.............................168秋天美....................................168

    ◎佳作大展台.............................169

    秋天的田野............................169拉牛筋....................................171秋天的图画............................172迷人的秋天............................174秋天的图画............................176秋日田野................................177

    ◎分步来审题.............................179

    ◎精心细选材.............................179

    ◎名师手把手.............................180 如何写去过( 或想去) 的地方180◎ 作文列提纲.................................183 

    ◎范文来引路.............................183人间仙境—西湖................183

    ◎佳作大展台.............................185我去过的地方........................185梦游武夷山............................187浪漫的爱琴海之旅................188游天鹅湖公园........................190游张家界的宝峰湖................191

    ◎分步来审题.............................193

    ◎精心细选材.............................194

    ◎名师手把手.............................195如何写家乡景物....................195

    ◎作文列提纲.............................196

    ◎范文来引路.............................196家乡的景物............................196

    ◎佳作大展台.............................198家乡的小河............................198

    山庄湖美................................199美丽的长乐江........................201美丽的旭山公园....................203我的家乡—慈溪................204家乡的芦苇塘........................206

    ◎分步来审题.............................208

    ◎精心细选材.............................208

    ◎名师手把手.............................209如何写旅游风景....................209

    ◎作文列提纲.............................210

    ◎范文来引路.............................210游明月山................................210

    ◎佳作大展台.............................212厦门之旅................................212游华山....................................213难忘的一次旅游....................215第一次旅游............................216参观河南省地质博物馆.........218参观秦始皇陵兵马俑............220

    ◎分步来审题.............................227

    ◎精心细选材.............................227

    ◎名师手把手.............................228如何写未来的世界................228

    ◎作文列提纲.............................229

    ◎范文来引路.............................230未来的汽车............................230

    ◎佳作大展台.............................231未来的房子............................231未来的书................................233未来的衣服............................234未来的医院............................236未来的墙纸............................238

    超级飞鞋................................240

    ◎分步来审题.............................242

    ◎精心细选材.............................242

    ◎名师手把手.............................243如何写假设情境....................243

    ◎作文列提纲.............................244

    ◎范文来引路.............................244假如我会变............................244

    ◎佳作大展台.............................246我想变成……........................246我会变....................................248我变成苍蝇了........................250

    ◎分步来审题.............................256

    ◎精心细选材.............................256

    ◎名师手把手.............................257如何写好动物........................257如何写好植物........................258如何写好物品........................258

    ◎作文列提纲.............................259

    ◎范文来引路.............................259家乡的啄木鸟........................259

    ◎佳作大展台.............................261小鲫鱼....................................261我的好朋友............................262校园里的梧桐树....................264美丽的蟹爪兰........................265

    目 录神气的笔袋............................267 我的好伙伴—小闹钟.........268

    特级教师教你写环保作文

    ◎名师教方法 .............................270 一、选好角度,小处落笔.....270 二、运用多种手法,具体描写  环境....................................270 对保护环境的认识◎分步来审题 .............................272

    ◎精心细选材 .............................272

    ◎名师手把手 .............................274如何写环境保护类作文.........274如何写家乡的环境变化.........274

    ◎作文列提纲 .............................275

    ◎范文来引路 .............................275我愿鸟声依旧 ........................275

    三、提出合理建议,积极改善  环境....................................271 四、要写出真情挚意 ............271 ◎佳作大展台 .............................277愿我们的家园更美好 ............277都是人类自己惹的祸 ............279别让电池污染环境 ................280环保主义者............................282小黄豆还没有找到安家的  地方....................................284树木的哭泣............................286一只小刺猬............................287

    特级教师教你写童话作文

    ◎名师教方法 .............................289 一、立足现实,大胆想象.....289 二、运用拟人,塑造形象.....289 动物童话故事◎分步来审题 .............................291

    三、以小见大,讲述道理.....290 ◎类文如何写 .............................290如何写童话类作文 ................290

    ◎精心细选材 .............................291

    ◎名师手把手 .............................292如何写动物童话故事 ............292



    ◎作文列提纲.............................295 时尚的猫................................299

    ◎范文来引路.............................295 机灵的小兔............................301小羊欢欢与凶恶的老狼.........295 乌鸦喝水后传........................303

    ◎佳作大展台.............................297 不洗头发大赛........................305鸭子“哑卡”开车记............297 森林选美大赛........................307

    ◎分步来审题.............................315

    ◎精心细选材.............................316

    ◎名师手把手.............................316 如何记下观察中的新发现.....316 

    ◎作文列提纲.............................318

    ◎范文来引路.............................318太阳照相的秘密....................318

    ◎佳作大展台.............................320神奇的蜘蛛............................320团结的蚂蚁............................321
  • 内容简介:
      本书针对3年级小学生的写作特点,选取教材中的写作主题,通过分步审题、精选素材、巧列提纲、范文引路来手把手指导学生学习写作技巧,并配以同类佳作范文,设置旁批点评,总结佳作亮点。
  • 作者简介:
      王大绩,是全国著名语文特级教师,中国自主招生网名师专家,长期从事高三教学、教研工作,十多年来一直参加北京市高考阅卷,并在阅卷领导小组负责《阅卷纵横》的编纂。悉心研究教学与高考规律,洞察各地高考试题走向。

  • 目录:
    ◎分步来审题................................6

    ◎精心细选材................................6

    ◎名师手把手................................8如何写自己............................... 8

    ◎作文列提纲................................8

    ◎范文来引路................................9“三星级”的我....................... 9

    ◎佳作大展台.............................. 11爱打扮的我............................. 11我的名片................................. 13有这么一个人......................... 15馋嘴的我................................. 16独一无二的我......................... 18镜子中的我............................. 19

    ◎分步来审题.............................. 21

    ◎精心细选材.............................. 21

    ◎名师手把手.............................. 22如何写爸爸妈妈..................... 22如何写爷爷奶奶..................... 22

    ◎作文列提纲.............................. 23

    ◎范文来引路.............................. 23家有“不”妈......................... 23

    ◎佳作大展台.............................. 25唠叨的老妈............................. 25我的妈妈有点“傻”............. 26我的懒老爸............................. 28我的爸爸................................. 30“巫婆奶奶”......................... 31“酷”爷爷............................. 32

    ◎分步来审题.............................. 34

    ◎精心细选材.............................. 34

    ◎名师手把手.............................. 35如何写老师............................. 35如何写同学............................. 36

    ◎作文列提纲.............................. 36

    ◎范文来引路.............................. 37我们班的“神探”................. 37

    ◎佳作大展台.............................. 38我的“冤家”同桌................. 38我的书迷好友......................... 40“麻辣烫”正传..................... 41可爱的娃娃老师..................... 43我们的“村长”..................... 45

    我心中最美的人..................... 46

    ◎分步来审题.............................. 48

    ◎精心细选材.............................. 49

    ◎名师手把手.............................. 50如何写社会人物..................... 50

    ◎作文列提纲.............................. 50

    ◎范文来引路.............................. 50乐于助人的叔叔..................... 50

    ◎佳作大展台.............................. 52卖棉花糖的老爷爷................. 52乐于助人的老爷爷................. 53卖橘子的老奶奶..................... 55我家楼上的老奶奶................. 56

    ◎精心细选材.............................. 68

    ◎名师手把手.............................. 69

    ◎分步来审题.............................. 67 如何写课余生活..................... 69

    ◎作文列提纲.............................. 71

    ◎范文来引路.............................. 72吹泡泡..................................... 72

    ◎佳作大展台.............................. 73我的课余生活......................... 73我的课余生活......................... 75捉迷藏..................................... 77我的课余生活......................... 79我的课余生活......................... 80我与书法结缘......................... 82

    ◎分步来审题.............................. 84

    ◎精心细选材.............................. 84

    ◎名师手把手.............................. 85 如何写熟悉的人的一件事...... 85 

    ◎作文列提纲.............................. 88

    ◎范文来引路.............................. 88超级“自恋狂”..................... 88

    ◎佳作大展台.............................. 90贴心老爸................................. 90姐姐的秘密............................. 92同桌的往事............................. 93喝酒的爸爸............................. 95爱唠叨的妈妈......................... 97让人琢磨不透的外公............. 98

    ◎分步来审题.............................100

    ◎精心细选材.............................101

    ◎名师手把手.............................102如何写学会了某种本领.........102

    ◎作文列提纲.............................104

    ◎范文来引路.............................105我学会了洗衣服....................105

    ◎佳作大展台.............................106我学会了包饺子....................106我学会了滑滑板....................108我学会了番茄炒蛋................110我学会了游泳........................112我学会了清洗床头................113

    ◎分步来审题.............................116

    ◎精心细选材.............................116

    ◎名师手把手.............................117

    如何写爸爸、妈妈对自己的 爱........................................117 

    ◎作文列提纲.............................119

    ◎范文来引路.............................119“藏书”的故事....................119

    ◎佳作大展台.............................121母亲的唠叨............................121玩伴“老爸”........................123母爱伴我成长........................125爸爸的爱................................127爸爸的爱看不见....................129爸爸的爱................................130

    ◎分步来审题.............................132

    ◎精心细选材.............................132

    ◎名师手把手.............................133如何写一件有趣的事............133

    ◎作文列提纲.............................133

    ◎范文来引路.............................134

    帮小兔洗澡............................134

    ◎佳作大展台.............................135一件有趣的事........................135灭蝇行动................................137一件有趣的事........................139摸人游戏................................140搞笑一家人............................142

    ◎分步来审题.............................144

    ◎精心细选材.............................145

    ◎名师手把手.............................146 如何写生活中的传统文化.....146 

    ◎作文列提纲.............................148

    ◎范文来引路.............................148粽叶飘香话端午....................148

    ◎佳作大展台.............................150贴门神....................................150我喜欢舞龙灯........................152端午节....................................153看秧歌....................................154贴“福”字............................156

    ◎分步来审题.............................163

    ◎精心细选材.............................164

    ◎名师手把手.............................165如何写秋天的图画................165

    ◎作文列提纲.............................167

    ◎范文来引路.............................168秋天美....................................168

    ◎佳作大展台.............................169

    秋天的田野............................169拉牛筋....................................171秋天的图画............................172迷人的秋天............................174秋天的图画............................176秋日田野................................177

    ◎分步来审题.............................179

    ◎精心细选材.............................179

    ◎名师手把手.............................180 如何写去过( 或想去) 的地方180◎ 作文列提纲.................................183 

    ◎范文来引路.............................183人间仙境—西湖................183

    ◎佳作大展台.............................185我去过的地方........................185梦游武夷山............................187浪漫的爱琴海之旅................188游天鹅湖公园........................190游张家界的宝峰湖................191

    ◎分步来审题.............................193

    ◎精心细选材.............................194

    ◎名师手把手.............................195如何写家乡景物....................195

    ◎作文列提纲.............................196

    ◎范文来引路.............................196家乡的景物............................196

    ◎佳作大展台.............................198家乡的小河............................198

    山庄湖美................................199美丽的长乐江........................201美丽的旭山公园....................203我的家乡—慈溪................204家乡的芦苇塘........................206

    ◎分步来审题.............................208

    ◎精心细选材.............................208

    ◎名师手把手.............................209如何写旅游风景....................209

    ◎作文列提纲.............................210

    ◎范文来引路.............................210游明月山................................210

    ◎佳作大展台.............................212厦门之旅................................212游华山....................................213难忘的一次旅游....................215第一次旅游............................216参观河南省地质博物馆.........218参观秦始皇陵兵马俑............220

    ◎分步来审题.............................227

    ◎精心细选材.............................227

    ◎名师手把手.............................228如何写未来的世界................228

    ◎作文列提纲.............................229

    ◎范文来引路.............................230未来的汽车............................230

    ◎佳作大展台.............................231未来的房子............................231未来的书................................233未来的衣服............................234未来的医院............................236未来的墙纸............................238

    超级飞鞋................................240

    ◎分步来审题.............................242

    ◎精心细选材.............................242

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