特级教师教你写作文：4年级课堂作文

作者: 王大绩著

出版社: 江苏人民出版社

出版时间: 2016-05

版次: 1

ISBN: 9787214162717

定价: 25.00

装帧: 平装

开本: 16开

纸张: 轻型纸

分类: 教材教辅考试>教辅>小学教辅>四年级

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　　本书针对4年级小学生的写作特点，选取教材中的写作主题，通过分步审题、精选素材、巧列提纲、范文引路来手把手指导学生学习写作技巧，并配以同类佳作范文，设置旁批点评，总结佳作亮点。
　　王大绩，是全国著名语文特级教师，中国自主招生网名师专家，长期从事高三教学、教研工作，十多年来一直参加北京市高考阅卷，并在阅卷领导小组负责《阅卷纵横》的编纂。悉心研究教学与高考规律，洞察各地高考试题走向。

目录特级教师教你写写人作文

◎名师教方法 ................................ 1   格特点 .................................. 1一、抓住特点，写出人物的精◎类文如何写 ................................ 3  神风貌 .................................. 1如何写同学............................... 3二、描写人物，表现人物性如何写老师............................... 3

我敬佩的一个人 ....................... 8我敬佩的一个人◎佳作大展台 .............................. 10

◎分步来审题 ................................ 5 我的语文老师 ......................... 10

◎精心细选材 ................................ 5 让我敬佩的一个人 ................. 12

◎名师手把手 ................................ 5 我最敬佩的人 ......................... 13如何写敬佩的一个人 ............... 5 我敬佩的一个人 ..................... 15

◎作文列提纲 ................................ 7 我最敬佩的人 ......................... 17

◎范文来引路 ................................ 8 让我敬佩的爸爸 ..................... 18

特级教师教你写记事作文

◎名师教方法 .............................. 20 一、把事情写完整，把经过写

1

◎分步来审题.............................. 23

◎精心细选材.............................. 24

◎名师手把手.............................. 24如何写成长的故事................. 24

◎作文列提纲.............................. 26

◎范文来引路.............................. 27一件让我后悔的事................. 27

◎佳作大展台.............................. 29补衣服..................................... 29不轻易言败............................. 31学溜冰..................................... 33我的成长小故事..................... 35艰难爱上读书......................... 37我的成长故事......................... 38

◎分步来审题.............................. 40

◎精心细选材.............................. 41

◎名师手把手.............................. 42如何写校园难忘的事............. 42

◎作文列提纲.............................. 43

◎范文来引路.............................. 44同桌的“三八线”................. 44

◎佳作大展台.............................. 45难忘的一件事......................... 45一件难忘的事......................... 47

难忘的一堂课......................... 48难忘的一堂课......................... 50百字听写ＰＫ赛..................... 52难忘的高跟鞋声..................... 54

◎分步来审题.............................. 56

◎精心细选材.............................. 57

◎名师手把手.............................. 58如何写说说心里话................. 58

◎作文列提纲.............................. 59

◎范文来引路.............................. 59妈妈，别让我难堪................. 59

◎佳作大展台.............................. 61妈妈，请听听我的心里话...... 61女儿的“辞职”信................. 63妈妈，您别再打麻将了.......... 65我和爸爸说说心里话............. 67爸爸，我想对您说................. 69外婆，我想对您说................. 70老师，我想对您说................. 72

◎分步来审题.............................. 74

◎精心细选材.............................. 74

◎名师手把手.............................. 75如何写大自然的启示............. 75

◎作文列提纲.............................. 76

◎范文来引路.............................. 77大自然的启示......................... 77

◎佳作大展台.............................. 78蜘蛛吃食................................. 78仙人掌的秘密......................... 80是种子总会发芽..................... 81丝瓜落花的秘密..................... 83蜘蛛的启示............................. 85大自然的启示......................... 87

◎分步来审题.............................. 89

◎精心细选材.............................. 89

◎名师手把手.............................. 90如何写热爱生命..................... 90

◎作文列提纲.............................. 92

◎范文来引路.............................. 92生命之重................................. 92

◎佳作大展台.............................. 94失去左腿，他没倒下............. 94热爱生命................................. 95小金鱼重生记......................... 97

顽强的“滴水观音”............. 99让生命发出耀眼的光彩.........101石缝中的松树........................103

◎分步来审题.............................105

◎精心细选材.............................105

◎名师手把手.............................106

如何写自己最得意的长处和  本领....................................106

◎作文列提纲.............................107

◎范文来引路.............................108埋在心底的自豪....................108

◎佳作大展台.............................109请为我竖起大拇指................109请为我竖起大拇指................111请为我竖起大拇指................113请为我竖起大拇指................115请为我竖起大拇指................116埋在心底的自豪....................118埋在心底的自豪....................120

◎分步来审题.............................125

◎精心细选材.............................126

◎名师手把手.............................126如何写自然景观....................126

◎作文列提纲.............................128

◎范文来引路.............................129游天河山................................129

◎佳作大展台.............................130游临城崆山白云洞................130美丽的鄱阳湖........................132游天梯山................................134游天池....................................136参观柏乡汉牡丹园................137

◎分步来审题.............................140

◎精心细选材.............................140

◎名师手把手.............................141 如何写校园里的一处景物.....141 ◎作文列提纲.............................143

◎范文来引路.............................144迷人的小花坛........................144

◎佳作大展台.............................146校园的花坛............................146校园一角................................147美丽的校园秋色....................149校园的一角............................151校园里的柳树........................153校园里的梧桐树....................155

◎分步来审题.............................157

◎精心细选材.............................157

◎名师手把手.............................158如何写乡村田园风光............158

◎作文列提纲.............................159

◎范文来引路.............................160迷人的乡村............................160

◎佳作大展台.............................161乡村夜唱................................161家乡的那一片绿....................163走进乡村................................165走进乡村................................167可爱的农丰欢乐园................169乡村四季美景........................170

◎分步来审题.............................172

◎精心细选材.............................173

◎名师手把手.............................173如何写导游词........................173

◎作文列提纲.............................174

◎范文来引路.............................175颐和园导游词........................175

◎佳作大展台.............................176九寨沟导游词........................176秦兵马俑导游词....................178九寨沟导游词........................180美丽神奇的九寨沟................181美丽的黄山............................183

长城导游词............................185 导游词—秦兵马俑............186

◎分步来审题.............................191

◎精心细选材.............................191

◎名师手把手.............................192 如何写观察事物的新发现.....192

◎作文列提纲.............................195

◎范文来引路.............................195鱼的启示................................195

◎佳作大展台.............................196蚯蚓........................................196蚂蚁........................................198观察小蜗牛............................200心爱的小奔马........................201小金鱼....................................203

◎分步来审题.............................205

◎精心细选材.............................206如何写自己喜欢的动物.........206

◎名师手把手.............................206

◎作文列提纲.............................208

◎范文来引路.............................208小白猫....................................208

◎佳作大展台.............................209松鼠........................................209小狗........................................211有趣的雄鸡............................213大熊猫....................................215三条小金鱼............................216啄木鸟....................................217

特级教师教你写作文·4 年级课堂作文特级教师教你写想象作文

◎名师教方法 .............................219 一、想象要大胆  ..................219 二、想象要新奇  ..................219

想象世界◎分步来审题 .............................221

◎精心细选材 .............................221

◎名师手把手 .............................222如何写想象作文 ....................222

◎作文列提纲 .............................224

◎范文来引路 .............................225

三、想象要具体  ..................220 四、想象要以现实为依据 ...220 记忆巧克力............................225

◎佳作大展台 .............................226未来书桌................................226神奇的汽车............................228我的奇思妙想 ........................229多功能笔................................231多功能垃圾处理器 ................233未来的汽车............................235

特级教师教你写童话作文

◎名师教方法 .............................237 一、以丰富的想象力，拟人手  法构思童话 .......................237 二、要注意人物和故事有新写童话故事◎分步来审题 .............................239

◎精心细选材 .............................240

◎名师手把手 .............................240

6   意 .......................................237 三、童话故事也要有  情节 ...................................237 如何写以动物或物品为主人公的  童话故事............................240 ◎作文列提纲 .............................241

◎范文来引路 .............................242昆虫读书会............................242

◎佳作大展台.............................244 小猴上学................................248续编《小木偶的故事》.........244 白头翁....................................249续写《小木偶的故事》.........246

◎分步来审题.............................254

◎精心细选材.............................254

◎名师手把手.............................255如何写连续观察日记............255

◎作文列提纲.............................256

◎范文来引路.............................257观察日记三则........................257

◎佳作大展台.............................259观察日记六则........................259观察日记四则........................262

观察日记六则........................265观察日记五则........................268

◎分步来审题.............................272

◎精心细选材.............................272

◎名师手把手.............................273如何写《乌塔》读后感.........273

◎作文列提纲.............................274

◎范文来引路.............................275从《乌塔》想到的................275

◎佳作大展台.............................276

从《乌塔》想到的................276从《乌塔》想到的................278从《乌塔》想到的................280由《乌塔》想到的................282从《乌塔》想到的................284

◎分步来审题.............................287

◎精心细选材.............................287

◎名师手把手.............................288

如何写回信............................288

◎作文列提纲.............................289

◎范文来引路.............................289给王虹的一封信....................289

◎佳作大展台.............................291给王虹的一封信....................291给王虹的一封信....................293给王虹的一封信....................294给王虹的一封信....................296

◎分步来审题.............................299

◎精心细选材.............................300

◎名师手把手.............................300 如何写胜似亲人看图作文.....300

◎作文列提纲.............................302

◎范文来引路.............................302“祖孙”二人........................302

◎佳作大展台.............................304胜似亲人................................304人间自有真情在....................305我的爱心之家........................307投之以桃，报之以李............309

◎分步来审题.............................312

◎精心细选材.............................312

◎名师手把手.............................313 如何看照片写战争灾难作文...313

◎作文列提纲.............................315

◎范文来引路.............................315废墟中的孩子........................315

◎佳作大展台.............................317一张老照片的控诉................317哭泣........................................319铭心刻骨的一幕....................321一个小孩的悲剧....................323
内容简介:
　　本书针对4年级小学生的写作特点，选取教材中的写作主题，通过分步审题、精选素材、巧列提纲、范文引路来手把手指导学生学习写作技巧，并配以同类佳作范文，设置旁批点评，总结佳作亮点。
作者简介:
　　王大绩，是全国著名语文特级教师，中国自主招生网名师专家，长期从事高三教学、教研工作，十多年来一直参加北京市高考阅卷，并在阅卷领导小组负责《阅卷纵横》的编纂。悉心研究教学与高考规律，洞察各地高考试题走向。
目录:
目录特级教师教你写写人作文

◎名师教方法 ................................ 1   格特点 .................................. 1一、抓住特点，写出人物的精◎类文如何写 ................................ 3  神风貌 .................................. 1如何写同学............................... 3二、描写人物，表现人物性如何写老师............................... 3

我敬佩的一个人 ....................... 8我敬佩的一个人◎佳作大展台 .............................. 10

◎分步来审题 ................................ 5 我的语文老师 ......................... 10

◎精心细选材 ................................ 5 让我敬佩的一个人 ................. 12

◎名师手把手 ................................ 5 我最敬佩的人 ......................... 13如何写敬佩的一个人 ............... 5 我敬佩的一个人 ..................... 15

◎作文列提纲 ................................ 7 我最敬佩的人 ......................... 17

◎范文来引路 ................................ 8 让我敬佩的爸爸 ..................... 18

特级教师教你写记事作文

◎名师教方法 .............................. 20 一、把事情写完整，把经过写

1

◎分步来审题.............................. 23

◎精心细选材.............................. 24

◎名师手把手.............................. 24如何写成长的故事................. 24

◎作文列提纲.............................. 26

◎范文来引路.............................. 27一件让我后悔的事................. 27

◎佳作大展台.............................. 29补衣服..................................... 29不轻易言败............................. 31学溜冰..................................... 33我的成长小故事..................... 35艰难爱上读书......................... 37我的成长故事......................... 38

◎分步来审题.............................. 40

◎精心细选材.............................. 41

◎名师手把手.............................. 42如何写校园难忘的事............. 42

◎作文列提纲.............................. 43

◎范文来引路.............................. 44同桌的“三八线”................. 44

◎佳作大展台.............................. 45难忘的一件事......................... 45一件难忘的事......................... 47

难忘的一堂课......................... 48难忘的一堂课......................... 50百字听写ＰＫ赛..................... 52难忘的高跟鞋声..................... 54

◎分步来审题.............................. 56

◎精心细选材.............................. 57

◎名师手把手.............................. 58如何写说说心里话................. 58

◎作文列提纲.............................. 59

◎范文来引路.............................. 59妈妈，别让我难堪................. 59

◎佳作大展台.............................. 61妈妈，请听听我的心里话...... 61女儿的“辞职”信................. 63妈妈，您别再打麻将了.......... 65我和爸爸说说心里话............. 67爸爸，我想对您说................. 69外婆，我想对您说................. 70老师，我想对您说................. 72

◎分步来审题.............................. 74

◎精心细选材.............................. 74

◎名师手把手.............................. 75如何写大自然的启示............. 75

◎作文列提纲.............................. 76

◎范文来引路.............................. 77大自然的启示......................... 77

◎佳作大展台.............................. 78蜘蛛吃食................................. 78仙人掌的秘密......................... 80是种子总会发芽..................... 81丝瓜落花的秘密..................... 83蜘蛛的启示............................. 85大自然的启示......................... 87

◎分步来审题.............................. 89

◎精心细选材.............................. 89

◎名师手把手.............................. 90如何写热爱生命..................... 90

◎作文列提纲.............................. 92

◎范文来引路.............................. 92生命之重................................. 92

◎佳作大展台.............................. 94失去左腿，他没倒下............. 94热爱生命................................. 95小金鱼重生记......................... 97

顽强的“滴水观音”............. 99让生命发出耀眼的光彩.........101石缝中的松树........................103

◎分步来审题.............................105

◎精心细选材.............................105

◎名师手把手.............................106

如何写自己最得意的长处和  本领....................................106

◎作文列提纲.............................107

◎范文来引路.............................108埋在心底的自豪....................108

◎佳作大展台.............................109请为我竖起大拇指................109请为我竖起大拇指................111请为我竖起大拇指................113请为我竖起大拇指................115请为我竖起大拇指................116埋在心底的自豪....................118埋在心底的自豪....................120

◎分步来审题.............................125

◎精心细选材.............................126

◎名师手把手.............................126如何写自然景观....................126

◎作文列提纲.............................128

◎范文来引路.............................129游天河山................................129

◎佳作大展台.............................130游临城崆山白云洞................130美丽的鄱阳湖........................132游天梯山................................134游天池....................................136参观柏乡汉牡丹园................137

◎分步来审题.............................140

◎精心细选材.............................140

◎名师手把手.............................141 如何写校园里的一处景物.....141 ◎作文列提纲.............................143

◎范文来引路.............................144迷人的小花坛........................144

◎佳作大展台.............................146校园的花坛............................146校园一角................................147美丽的校园秋色....................149校园的一角............................151校园里的柳树........................153校园里的梧桐树....................155

◎分步来审题.............................157

◎精心细选材.............................157

◎名师手把手.............................158如何写乡村田园风光............158

◎作文列提纲.............................159

◎范文来引路.............................160迷人的乡村............................160

◎佳作大展台.............................161乡村夜唱................................161家乡的那一片绿....................163走进乡村................................165走进乡村................................167可爱的农丰欢乐园................169乡村四季美景........................170

◎分步来审题.............................172

◎精心细选材.............................173

◎名师手把手.............................173如何写导游词........................173

◎作文列提纲.............................174

◎范文来引路.............................175颐和园导游词........................175

◎佳作大展台.............................176九寨沟导游词........................176秦兵马俑导游词....................178九寨沟导游词........................180美丽神奇的九寨沟................181美丽的黄山............................183

长城导游词............................185 导游词—秦兵马俑............186

◎分步来审题.............................191

◎精心细选材.............................191

◎名师手把手.............................192 如何写观察事物的新发现.....192

◎作文列提纲.............................195

◎范文来引路.............................195鱼的启示................................195

◎佳作大展台.............................196蚯蚓........................................196蚂蚁........................................198观察小蜗牛............................200心爱的小奔马........................201小金鱼....................................203

◎分步来审题.............................205

◎精心细选材.............................206如何写自己喜欢的动物.........206

◎名师手把手.............................206

◎作文列提纲.............................208

◎范文来引路.............................208小白猫....................................208

◎佳作大展台.............................209松鼠........................................209小狗........................................211有趣的雄鸡............................213大熊猫....................................215三条小金鱼............................216啄木鸟....................................217

特级教师教你写作文·4 年级课堂作文特级教师教你写想象作文

◎名师教方法 .............................219 一、想象要大胆  ..................219 二、想象要新奇  ..................219

想象世界◎分步来审题 .............................221

◎精心细选材 .............................221

◎名师手把手 .............................222如何写想象作文 ....................222

◎作文列提纲 .............................224

◎范文来引路 .............................225

三、想象要具体  ..................220 四、想象要以现实为依据 ...220 记忆巧克力............................225

◎佳作大展台 .............................226未来书桌................................226神奇的汽车............................228我的奇思妙想 ........................229多功能笔................................231多功能垃圾处理器 ................233未来的汽车............................235

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◎名师教方法 .............................237 一、以丰富的想象力，拟人手  法构思童话 .......................237 二、要注意人物和故事有新写童话故事◎分步来审题 .............................239

◎精心细选材 .............................240

◎名师手把手 .............................240

6   意 .......................................237 三、童话故事也要有  情节 ...................................237 如何写以动物或物品为主人公的  童话故事............................240 ◎作文列提纲 .............................241

◎范文来引路 .............................242昆虫读书会............................242

◎佳作大展台.............................244 小猴上学................................248续编《小木偶的故事》.........244 白头翁....................................249续写《小木偶的故事》.........246

◎分步来审题.............................254

◎精心细选材.............................254

◎名师手把手.............................255如何写连续观察日记............255

◎作文列提纲.............................256

◎范文来引路.............................257观察日记三则........................257

◎佳作大展台.............................259观察日记六则........................259观察日记四则........................262

观察日记六则........................265观察日记五则........................268

◎分步来审题.............................272

◎精心细选材.............................272

◎名师手把手.............................273如何写《乌塔》读后感.........273

◎作文列提纲.............................274

◎范文来引路.............................275从《乌塔》想到的................275

◎佳作大展台.............................276

从《乌塔》想到的................276从《乌塔》想到的................278从《乌塔》想到的................280由《乌塔》想到的................282从《乌塔》想到的................284

◎分步来审题.............................287

◎精心细选材.............................287

◎名师手把手.............................288

如何写回信............................288

◎作文列提纲.............................289

◎范文来引路.............................289给王虹的一封信....................289

◎佳作大展台.............................291给王虹的一封信....................291给王虹的一封信....................293给王虹的一封信....................294给王虹的一封信....................296

◎分步来审题.............................299

◎精心细选材.............................300

◎名师手把手.............................300 如何写胜似亲人看图作文.....300

◎作文列提纲.............................302

◎范文来引路.............................302“祖孙”二人........................302

◎佳作大展台.............................304胜似亲人................................304人间自有真情在....................305我的爱心之家........................307投之以桃，报之以李............309

◎分步来审题.............................312

◎精心细选材.............................312

◎名师手把手.............................313 如何看照片写战争灾难作文...313

◎作文列提纲.............................315

◎范文来引路.............................315废墟中的孩子........................315

◎佳作大展台.............................317一张老照片的控诉................317哭泣........................................319铭心刻骨的一幕....................321一个小孩的悲剧....................323

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